I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi it;s Siyona here I like the vido you it has got alot of infomachon blog you later.
ReplyDeleteThanks siyona but some of your comment does not make sense.
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Hola it's Nevaeh.
ReplyDeleteNext time can you be louder because I could not here you but I could hear Miss waho.
till next time bye from me
Hi Nevaeh how is your day?
DeleteWell before you answer that just letting you know
that if I did I would have to yell at the top of my voice.
Hi kaunteya here. I like how you were reading but maybe add some more information about what you were learning about. nice job sonny. Bye!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback and next time I will try to to put more infomation n it .
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