I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Sonny, it's Ashrita! These were some interesting facts about Saturn, I especially like the fact where you said Saturn is made out of gas. Maybe next time before you post check your grammar. Well cya!
Hey sonny roxy here, I like how you have put this on your blog it makes it stand out a lot . I like how you have made it talk and say your facts it looks great keep it up From Roxy
Kia ora Sonny Chloe here. I love how you have put some really interesting facts in. Yes I do agree with Ashrita by Likeing the fact that it is infact made out of gas. Spelling you may need to work on. Bye for now
HI sonny It is Camryn your voki looks so funny but cool I when to the link and clicked on the video and listened to it keep the goood work up good bye.
Thanks for commenting on my blog Chelsea I read your comment and some of it did not make sense so just letting you know that I read your comment and thanks for the feedback.
HI Sonny, Milan here This post looks very interesting I thought while your voki was talking that this was really good but then I realised that on the post before the voki I realised that there wasn't much info about the voki or even the planet. Maybe you could put some more info on the voki and the post because it didn't really make sense. I also checked out you video on the other post and I couldn't really heat you in it only everyone and Miss Waho. But everything else was fine. Catch you later
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Sonny, it's Ashrita!
ReplyDeleteThese were some interesting facts about Saturn, I especially like the fact where you said Saturn is made out of gas.
Maybe next time before you post check your grammar.
Well cya!
Thanks Ashrital
DeleteHey sonny roxy here,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have put this on your blog it makes it stand out a lot . I like how you have made it talk and say your facts it looks great keep it up
From Roxy
Thanks Roxy I like your comment about my work and thank you for commenting.
DeleteKia ora Sonny Chloe here.
ReplyDeleteI love how you have put some really interesting facts in.
Yes I do agree with Ashrita by Likeing the fact that it is infact made out of gas.
Spelling you may need to work on.
Bye for now
Thanks Chloe for commenting I hope you have fantastic day ahead you.
DeleteHI sonny It is Camryn your voki looks so funny but cool I when to the link and clicked on the video and listened to it keep the goood work up good bye.
ReplyDeleteOh thanks cam thank you for saying it's funny cause I tryed to make it look as goofy as possible.
DeleteHello Sonny Chelsea here.
ReplyDeleteI how much information there is.
Did this take long to do?
Next time can you give more information?
SEE YOU!
Thanks for commenting on my blog Chelsea I read your comment and some of it did not make sense so just letting you know that I read your comment and thanks for the feedback.
DeleteHI Sonny, Milan here
ReplyDeleteThis post looks very interesting I thought while your voki was talking that this was really good but then I realised that on the post before the voki I realised that there wasn't much info about the voki or even the planet. Maybe you could put some more info on the voki and the post because it didn't really make sense. I also checked out you video on the other post and I couldn't really heat you in it only everyone and Miss Waho. But everything else was fine. Catch you later
Thanks Milan I like your comment just saying we could only say three facts about it so I did three facts.
DeleteHi Sonny it is me Dani. I like this just please add more text but awesome job. so make that a challege. Bye Sonny.
ReplyDeleteThanks Dani for the comment but it seem's that your commenting is out of shape .
DeleteHey Sonny Shikarn here your voki is great I like your facts about saturn Bye
ReplyDeleteHI Sonny, Siyona here
ReplyDeleteThis post looks very interesting and I like your vioki it is verry intrusting.