I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, March 30, 2021
Making salts
Thursday, March 18, 2021
The Beatlemania
Hey Jude
Monday, March 15, 2021
Write your own narrative story
Write your own narrative opening
Thursday, March 11, 2021
Show don't tell
"The buildings were tall"
The buildings were menacing in height with their neon lights making fit in with the rest.
"Sarah was really upset"
Sarah was lying down, emotions rolling in, getting the news of what happened and knowing she might never see them again. She didn't even notice the tears rolling down her face.
"She was so happy to see him"
She saw him and ran to him, with the expression you have on your 1st birthday.
"The lake was beautiful"
The lake stood while the it reflected it's lights, making good seem the wrong word for it, beautiful seemed to fit.
"It was stunning"
It was something angels would be jealous, something that I could steer at for ages not caring how odd I look doing it.
Anzac the Last Post
A.n.z.a.c
Wednesday, March 3, 2021
Tim Finn and The Herbs
Tim Finn and the herbs
What line explains their passive resistance method?
I know Te Whiti will never be defeated,
And even at the darkest hour,
His presence will remain.
I'll sing to you the song of Parihaka.
Monday, March 1, 2021
Metaphor and similes
Metaphor and similes difference.
Metaphors and similes are different where if it was a simile you would say "hey that man is LIKE a cat" when it's a metaphor "Hey that is a cat". Simile is saying what is similar where Metaphor are saying that it is what it says it is.