I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Sonny, It's good to see you presenting your first photo-montage above. You've got the idea that fragments of photographs can be added together to create something new. The position of the spatula in your collage is like an arm. If you reverse its position it might start to suggest that "the head is on the spatula being served." It's fun to move parts around and see what happens. I hope you enjoy the digital collage. Good effort. :)
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Kia ora Sonny,
ReplyDeleteIt's good to see you presenting your first photo-montage above. You've got the idea that fragments of photographs can be added together to create something new. The position of the spatula in your collage is like an arm. If you reverse its position it might start to suggest that "the head is on the spatula being served." It's fun to move parts around and see what happens. I hope you enjoy the digital collage. Good effort. :)