I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
two or more weeks ago we had swimming lessions it was fun it was easy because our school that went there in groups and i go there everyday like every day and now im in the best group in the school.
Kia ora Sonny, Ashrita here! I agree swimming was fun! I really enjoyed over taking you Xp, Just kidding but really I was sluggish doing swimming everyday!! Maybe next time before you post check if you have the right grammar.
Hey Sonny TJ here swimming is fun and if you are with someone in your family I know you love swimming and I do too. have a good day at school see you later blog u later TJ out.
Hey Sonny, Aryan here checking out your blog! I like how you put a picture in so we know what the pool looks like. Next time remember capitals for I's and the starts of . Anyways, blog ya later!
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Kia ora Sonny, Ashrita here!
ReplyDeleteI agree swimming was fun! I really enjoyed over taking you Xp, Just kidding but really I was sluggish doing swimming everyday!!
Maybe next time before you post check if you have the right grammar.
Well blog u later!!!
Hey Sonny TJ here swimming is fun and if you are with someone in your family I know you love swimming and I do too. have a good day at school see you later blog u later TJ out.
ReplyDeleteI like it I see you like swimming to me to I like it
ReplyDeleteHi Sonny I like how you want we did and you said if it was easy or not and next time you should put an I as a capital blog you latter!!!!
ReplyDeleteHey Sonny, This looks like a great pool to swim in did you swim in that for a competition.
ReplyDeleteHey Sonny, Aryan here checking out your blog!
ReplyDeleteI like how you put a picture in so we know what the pool looks like.
Next time remember capitals for I's and the starts of .
Anyways, blog ya later!